The ripple effect
The ripple effect
This paragraph was written by Hooria(me) corrected by Jayyad and Mishaikh.
Sometimes we can’t realize what is going on with us and many things came and go in our lives, we just give a damn care to them, but when those things are either get lost from us or we ourselves loose them then we get to know their worth in our lives. As soon as I completed my education I lost all my college friends because all of them were either married or went to other cities.I could never realize that my friend were so important for me. It was a tremendous setback for my mind and heart. I couldn’t regain to my normal activities of life after several days. Now I am also busy in my life, but sometimes I recall my friends any past memories.
Friend are a great treasure, we should be true to them and acknowledge their importance.
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Corrected paragraph
Sometimes we can’t realize what is going on with us and many things came come and go in our lives, we just give a damn care to them, but when those things are either get lost from us or we ourselves loose them, then we get to know their worth in our lives. As soon as I completed my education I lost all my college friends because all of them were either got married or went to other cities.I could never realize that my friend were so important for me. It was a tremendous shock for me missing them. I couldn’t regain to my normal activities of life for several days. Now, I am also busy in my life too, but sometimes I recall my past friends any and my past memories.
Friends are a great treasure, we should be attached true to them and acknowledge their importance in our lives.
